A proficiently strong response Fred. One small point on the slide evaluating the title of your film. You say "Transit" could you revise to "The Pursuit".
Well done, consistently interesting with close references to your film. You discuss the concept of enigma splendidly.
You could add to your evaluation question 1 another slide on lighting and colour alteration in order to reinforce the generic convention of menace. The ambient lighting adds to the sense of realism in your gritty thriller film whilst the black and white sequences reinforce your films noir thriller roots.
A proficiently strong response Fred. One small point on the slide evaluating the title of your film. You say "Transit" could you revise to "The Pursuit".
ReplyDeleteWell done, consistently interesting with close references to your film. You discuss the concept of enigma splendidly.
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ReplyDeleteYou could add to your evaluation question 1 another slide on lighting and colour alteration in order to reinforce the generic convention of menace. The ambient lighting adds to the sense of realism in your gritty thriller film whilst the black and white sequences reinforce your films noir thriller roots.